Tuesday, June 23, 2009

What went wrong?

I think and think..
And I think again...

What did I do?
I have no clue….

What went wrong?
No, I m not strong….

I dig and dig…
Back into the time..what happened so big

That everything came to a standstill
From where I could see no will

I wish I would have known..
Why was the flame blown?
Why was I thrown?

Why do I have to take this?
Why?

I tried hard and hard,
But all I could get was only dread and dread.

Every moment was a test,
There was nothing that could rest…

Everything was moving..
Everyone was going

And all I could do was nothing,
Absolutely nothing…

-Goblet Pumpkin

9 comments:

  1. I picked up the dice, rolled it twice
    dropped it and found u,
    So I came here, I liked the poet in u,
    N I thot I like this blog too.


    Nice. Expect me back. :-)
    Anand.

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  2. hey thnk u....4 dropping by my blog..nnnd yes u r welcome always...

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  3. that was a wonderful piece of work..
    keep smiling :)
    tc

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  4. very wording for a wonderful feeling . realy amazing poetry !
    congrate ! for a nice poetry.

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  5. its good,the ideas are nice...but at times rhyme seems a little forced...ex: think and wink...am no expert in poetry(not even close to one wen it comes to English) but I hope u wont mind me bein a little critical here...

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  6. @Pyaasa Sajal

    I didnt mind at all..glad tht u figured it...will work on it..thnk u ...

    keep coming bck..

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